Good Old Man

Good Old Man

A Poem by Noor.92
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Just because I had a heart to write.. ;)

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Deep down in the good old town

There lives an old man so brown

 

His eyes are kind, his heart pure and warm

And he makes everyone happy and calm

 

With kids, he is always way too funny

And gives them cookies without any money

 

He is a man who is so bright

He is happy to bake cookies at night

 

Each morning, he sits up in his cheerful stall

And his costumers are all elder and small

 

His cookies melt everyone’s heart

For they are filled with love and warmth

© 2015 Noor.92


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Noor.92
Happy Reading :)

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Haha
such a sweet simple poem
I liked the rhythm in it- since I like to write like this;))

Posted 1 Year Ago


Noor.92

1 Year Ago

thanks for liking, friend.. ;)
Don't usually like poetry, but this was a cheerful read. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

1 Year Ago

Thanks Kevin! Your comment made my day ;-)
Feeling nostalgic, reminds me of my childhood. Happy reading

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Thanks for liking Aanand..:-)
Beautiful poem, Noor. Heartwarming. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Thank you for such nice words Rudi... :)
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Mia
This made me smile. It reminded me of my grandmother. Really nice writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciation Mia.. :)
lovely and heart warming, reminds me of pleasant mornings

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for liking Anurag.. :)
anurag

4 Years Ago

Do you mind doing me a favor? Would you be kind to review mine please?? i want to this beforehand, i.. read more
Noor.92

4 Years Ago

yes sure no problem ;)
Happy reading indeed, such a man would be welcome the world over, it would make this world a much better place, nice writing Noor :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Glad you liked it Richard :-)
i enjoyed this, it reminded me of my grandfather who passed. it gave me a warm feeling :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

I am happy that you enjoyed it..:-)
A sweet, gentle tale. Indeed, he is a "good old man". I once heard of a woman much like him, and she was called "The cookie lady".

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

4 Years Ago

Thanks for appreciation Samuel.. :)
indeed such simple hearted and gentle people are like pr.. read more

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Added on June 1, 2015
Last Updated on June 1, 2015
Tags: gentle, love, pure, old

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Noor.92
Noor.92

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