My happy place

A description of my living place which i have always loved to imagine..

Far from the madding crowd, 

Streams run like curling snakes 

Quiet and serene, filled with solitude 

A soft breeze whistling around 

Small raindrops moistening the ground  

The house at the top of the hill, 

with smoke puffing out of roof

The walls covered with natural grass, 

And the birds chirping lively songs 

Evening tea is the best part of it all 

In this charming land, during fall  

Yet one thing is missing, to complete it all 

A tender-hearted companion to enjoy a blitheful stroll

Author's Note

Just a short dreamy poem out of my love for natural sceneries...reviews are always welcome.. ☺️

Reviews

[Helena]

Truly lovely Noor. A lovely gentle, descriptive write. Just one little thing I would to point out. If you make two lines out of "The house at the top of the hill, with smoke puffing out of roof" it would look more even. Just a thought dear.

Thank you for submitting this to our Group writing!

Kind regards
Helena

[Noor.92]

thank you for your kind suggestion Helena..Good day :)

[merit]

Scenery=very good and strong here;)

[Noor.92]

thank you for the compliment ! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You described a beautiful place. I agree with the ending. Always better with good company. Thank you Noor for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Noor.92]

happy you liked it Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

[Saman Fatima]

Wow, such a place surely sounds so marvellous. Even just reading it and imagining to be living in such a place is giving me some sort of tranquillity!

[Noor.92]

That's my wish even since to live at such a place, Saman..:) thanks for liking!