[Heaven's Feel]

In this darkness,
I want to know the light.
So even if I'm surrounded by ugly,
I'll keep looking for beautiful.
Even if all my hands ever touch,
Are things or people covered in filth-
I still believe I can find something clean and pure.
Although I hear curses and words that damage,
I can also detect traces of supportive prayers and comforting praises.
These things have been hinted to me,
In the smile of a stranger,
The laughter of a friend,
And the embrace of a lover.
Although it appears I'm sinking deeper and deeper into a hole;
One which has a bottom that seems to know no end,
I still look up.
That bit of light, shining down.
I want to reach it.
And even if I never do,
I can still smile and chase the dream
Of becoming one with it.
So if I die in this darkness;
Even if I know there's a possibility it's just going to end here...
I'll keep longing for that day
That I'll sync with that captivating aura.
I'm filled with the desire to know,
Heaven's Feel.

Reviews

[razholandr]

Wow, really amazingly worded! I love it! The end line really ties it all together~ ^ ^

"I'm filled with the desire to know, Heaven's Feel."
Really heartfelt and it flowed nicely

[Wolfbaby]

Ooh this is deep! Good flow and punctuation. I think this is my favorite of yours so far. Great job!

~Wolfbaby