Closer

Standing here with you,
On top of this roof.
Enjoying the view...
Of your eyes.
Each others reflections in our orbs;
Like polished mirrors.
Big and so wide,
While we clench fingers.
And...

[Chorus]:
Our lips tremble like earthquakes,
When nearing our targets.
Heart beats get faster,
As I pilot-
Closer to you.
You're closer to me,
Than anyone could ever be.

And after we break away,
Making sure it's not a dream.
We can only laugh about,
How this came to be.
They said not to be naive,
And not to lose your grip.
But how can I resist,
When our palms are pressed together,
Fingertip to fingertip?

[Chorus]

Is this a romance?
Is this what they call love?
Is this what people search and die for?
So many questions,
And I'm not sure what's right.
All I know is, that you make me feel so alive.

[Chorus]

Reviews

[razholandr]

Nice :) I like it! I would love to hear how it all goes together ^ ^

[Rei]

wow this was a really good song/poem. The way I imagine it is it starts slow then gets fast and then slows down at the last chorus. See? You are such a good writer that I can pretty much hear the song in my head. This was so beautiful and powerful great job!