You Make Good Men Go Bad.

You Make Good Men Go Bad.

A Poem by Chaos Complex
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Sexy time...

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Eyes to the sky- my love.
Now focus them there.
Let me share- my love.
The burdens we'll bare.
Star crossed lovers-
Interlaced with each other.
Only knowing,
That the endings
Going to be a train wreck!

But how can I say no to you-
When you whisper my name like that?
And how can I walk away...
When you clench onto my arms and chant-
"I want this forever."
Forever doesn't exist...
But as long as I love you,
I can't leave you like this!

We shouldn't be in these positions-
Breathing so hard.
We mustn't be caught,
In each others arms.
If anyone saw us-
It would only leave scars.
But when your eyes focused like that-
I could careless if everything else fell apart!

And how can I say no to you
When you whisper my name like that?
And how can I walk away...
When you clench onto my arms and chant-
"I want this forever."
Forever doesn't exist...
But as long as I love you,
I can't leave you like this!

And I'll confess,
That I've never felt anything like this.
Sin all over, but it feels like bliss in your lips.
"He'll never know- and she'll never see."
Words that hurt and assure me.
You swallowed all of my purity...
And yet I can't feel dirty...

Cause I love it so much,
When you whisper my name like that.
And I can't walk away,
When we clench onto each other and chant-
"I want this forever."
Forever doesn't exist.
But I'll always love you,
While we communicate passion between our hips...






© 2010 Chaos Complex


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Excellent. The flow was perfect and I like the story this one told.
From what I could tell from reading this, from inbetween the lines, it seems the two are having an affain, are they not?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A+++++++++++. On an unrelated note, the title reminds me of the Cobra Starship song. XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW amazing love it wow is realy all i can say

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometime man had no reason to complain. When he is lucky enough to be allow into the secret of a woman. Best days in a man life. Poem is outstanding. The flow and story was perfect. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chaos Complex
Chaos Complex

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I like to express my emotions and feelings in poetry. I write a lot of rap/hip hop stuff. I'm really vulgar. Deal with it. I don't get many reviews, but thank you to those who even bother to re.. more..

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