*Work In Progress*

Just something I wrote to vent.

[Hate.]
I bleed a hole into the earth,
All the pissed off, boiling blood,
Release it out of me-
Oh yes, I'll share this tragedy.

[Sorrow.]
I'm hurt-
And even I've almost ceased to care.
Cause if my heart was bared,
Eyes would just roll over me.
(Why won't you examine or stare?)

[Lie.]
I'll throw out every excuse.
I'm tired, I'm overworked, I'm pooped...
But underneath it all I'm alone,
Running the same old loop!

[Hypocrisy.]
It's sad.
Growing up with an angry dad,
Who made me feel like crap.
And now we're gonna pretend that I'm okay.
(Yeah, it's all okay...)

[Doubt.]
Even if I push myself,
I'm just not good enough...
I'm just not good enough...
I'm just not good enough...
Even if I do my best,
It's just not good enough...
It's just not good enough...
I'll never be good enough.

[Courage.]

But thank God I have the strength to live different from my mentality.
I still have a bit of hope, even if it's just a fragile piece.

I'm not done yet,
I won't hear it.
There's so much I want to fix...

I'm not done yet,
There's no clearance-
I'm going to change ALL THIS S**T.

[Live.]
*Work In Progress*

Reviews

[Amy]

Oh my gosh I love this Ren wonderful I love everything bout this wow aboslotly awsom I can relate to so much of this I haven't Bern on much lately and this hit me somewhere thanx :)

[Rose Tyler]

Bravo.
Even if it was just a rant that helped you to vent, I think you did a wonderful job of writing this out. Your word choices were powerful and there was meaning behind these words.
Keep up the great work.