few comma's before a fullstop

few comma's before a fullstop

A Poem by Nothing Personal

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Or
pack some scotch in a bottle of coke
so that it would be scotch
but would look like coke
and would drink like coke ,
but only afterwards
(with the head spinning and the body feeling light
and the mind will be less heavy
from the unbearable heaviness of life)
would it feel like scotch ,
although we would just throw away an empty bottle of coke.


Nothing Personal, July 2, 2013

© 2013 Nothing Personal


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:: hahahaha... are you drunk on coke ? ... :P

:: it's good to read you again... :)

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