Senses

Moved by music

SENSES

*inspired by 5 senses* by 50cent

 

Exploring skin, tasting flesh

Barely touching just lingering

Above my senses

All my senses

Intoxication from love

in a fog of ecstasy

swimming in desire

above my senses

all my senses

Lips traveling slowly

Up and down the spine

Intoxicating heat

Need desire yearning

Above my senses

All my senses

Passions dance acted out

Heart to heart

Souls dancing in time

To the erotic beat of desire

In unison, perfect harmony

Yours and mine

Above my senses

All my senses

Breathe me in

Let it control your senses

Feel me want me

Float

Above my senses

All my senses

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Kiddo, your writing is suburb. I love reading all you have. You are my inspiration ...it shows how much you put into your writing..everything as you do in life...Brilliant just brilliant. I can feel the swaying, the desires, and drink up all the rest in between over and above. The senses are there for something and look out girl because you used em all...in the most captivating and sensual way ..love it!!

[Richielee]

I was trying to picture 50 cent rapping to this as i read through but i jst couldn't picture it, gonna go on youtube now and hunt down the track

[∂αʌ<..]

beautifully exquisite..and yes..you captured all senses!

[Rene Velez]

I love the poem...but not 50, LOL, this is way better than anything 50 would come up with...

[ImagineItAll]

Love when music moves someone to write or create something with their talent. No exception here! Wonderful write.

[TJ]

Beautiful piece, November. So vivid, such imagination. Much better than 50 lol

[November Gold]

thank you Lily :) and yes...it is ;)

[Lily Mae]

I love this.. and all it senses.. ;) To float above the senses...is bliss..xx