You

Love breaks the silence.

You've done it.
I'm in a pit. I'm suffering.
You put me here. It's not your fault.
I can't be mad, for you bring me such positive emotions.
I can't be glad, as your messages are mixed in nature.
You do, yet you don't.
You can, yet you can't.
You give, yet you take.
You broke the tranquility, the silence.
I'm so confused...
Do you care?

Well I don't.
I'm done.
I can't put up with this.
I prefer solitude.
Sweet, silent solitude.


...and yet you linger... you... in my thoughts... I can't take it anymore.

end it, please.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is such an extraordinary mix of emotions and so finely written. You appear to 'want out', yet you linger.. you perhaps set blame on the other person but.. you think still with.. a certain depth of uncertainly.

Reading again, i find this writing more than exceptional: it has gentleness, it has guts, it has calm and yet - it roars.

[NowhereMan]

Surprisingly accurate interpretation, actually. There was so much going on in the time of writing this poem, my writing reflected my state of mind. It yielded both positive and negative results ;) Thanks so much for the review!

[emmajoy]

When it comes to serious themes, whethere fact or fiction, i see no point in scanning rather than slowly trying to discover what the writer is feelingor saying. How he or she lays the words.. and why the necessity to choose this or that way. Yes, that reads a little too much, but tis true.. :)

[emmajoy]

Poorly put, so sorry.

[Zoya]

Solitude is quite desirable in these kind of situations. But still, yes, we tend to think about the people whom we once loved. Nice write. Keep writing!

[NowhereMan]

Hey, thanks so much! I do my best :)

[Zoya]

You're welcome :)