Solitary Cypress

Do you dream,

   my cadenced answer?

Of how shared silence

wracks a roiled heart,

   as stale cinnamon lingers

      the solitary cypress,

if hearts never echo

   their final lament?

Reviews

[Slowerthanlife]

I like the feeling in this. It makes me think. I love it. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

well said! very dreamy and rich with scents, textures and sounds ... a must read several times poem for me ..very glad to see you back! hope other projects went well for you Nusquam!
E.
ps closing lines are impressive ... the melancholy sadness amplified many times