Disappointment

what i felt that day. i hope that this will let all of know that you are not alone. we all feel blue once awhile.

Disappointment

 

Mistakes are proof that you're trying.

That's what they all say.

 

But what if your mistake is so f*****g huge that you can never forgive yourself,

Will you still try to put the pieces together?

 

What if that mistake is something that will change your life forever?

Will you still try? Will you give up?

 

What if your mistake hurt your loved ones?

Will you still try and fix everything?

 

What if you're trying to make things better, but instead it took a turn for the worse?

Will you still try?

 

What if you were me?

Will you still try?

Author's Note

ignore any mistakes please. thanks.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I can relate to this feeling. Sometimes it's not the regrets of making mistakes but the regrets that why did we put ourselves in a situation which made us do that mistake..

As to your question, I think we never stop trying to better ourselves or else we accept the condition we're in..

A good write. I liked reading this.

P.S I didn't find any grammar mistakes ;)

[Chase Dylan]

If I was you, would I still try... Would I still try if the hurt was bigger than the f***s given...Hah... I adored this one, and hopefully the trying never ceases till I die... Very well penned...

[Isabella Ivy]

'Will you still try?' I like this. I like the repitition and the question is so valid. Good read :) I.I.