Cat Got Your Tongue?

The deep night fog

Hangs in the air

Making all beings

Blind to their surroundings.

As you walk the streets,

A nervousness comes over you,

Making the hairs on your neck

Stand up with anxiety.

I am the one

Silently climbing down the building

Like a dark, solid shadow

Making your fear increase.

I am the one

Slinking forward

In your direction

While you stand blindly

Awaiting your fate.

I am the one

To see your expression;

Terrified beyond compare,

Making me laugh with glee.

I am the one

To smell your fear

Of myself and the surrounding darkness,

Which is where you’ll shortly be.

I am the one

To taste your blood,

Kissing your lips,

Tasting its warm, salty, and a copper flavor,

Making my own body feel heated and strong.

I am the one

To hear your last breath

Before my claws sink into the jugular

Making a waterfall of garnet jewels

Cascade onto the sidewalk.

I am… Catwoman

And now, both of us are gone.

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"Before my claws sink into the jugular

Making a waterfall of garnet jewels

Cascade onto the sidewalk."

The second line is just really awesome. I couldn't even think something up like that. I love this poem because of the dark description that hides the catwoman in her wake. Amazing!

[Jesse Jacques]

great job! no spelling or grammar mistakes.

[Julie Beth]

umm AMAZING!! loved it :)

[Grace Catherine C.]

Lovely ,Doll, really good!

[quinfinn]

deliciously creepy and seductive, makes me want to meet such a fate. charming write...masterful!

[Alexa Tasch]

lol so cool

[Eile MacIntyre]

Waterfall of garnet jewels... How awesome is that?
Answer: VERY!

[Daydreamer54]

I like this! yeah girl power! I love the senses you use and the imagery great write! ^^

[Amber Tasch]

oh my god thats awesome!!!!