The Alpha's Confrontation

The Alpha's Confrontation

A Poem by Odayin
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Those crazy yellow eyes pierce your soul,
You look into the wolf's overwhelming past,
Knowledge of the empty phantoms it stole,
As it chased the moon on your vacant lasts.
The contact quickly gets terminated with lust,
The beating painfully throbs against your throat,
That absent instinct to save every mattering must,
Overtaking you, inexistent, upon your oasis it floats.

The trees bow down to the devils advocate,
Bending low to completely halt all exterior motion.
You realize there's a distant repulse with fate,
And that the wolf's soul will empty all it's emotion.

You will get the haphazard luxury of a witness,
Leaving all those worries far along the trail,
You sprint to the Alpha, not a second to miss,
Before he smiles maliciously and stares stale.
The transition is lusciously hidden in haze,
Both of your features simultaneously flare,
Your used body, thrown aside in deep daze,
And you feel the heartbeat, the one you now share.

© 2012 Odayin


Author's Note

Odayin
The Alpha and the wolf are one in the same.
This might be a little hard to understand at some points, but the end is simpler.

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I'm going to review the writing before I attempt the meaning.
So, here we go:
The rhymes are really amazing, and it has a impeccable rhythm. I love the language: Haphazard luxury of a witness, just great, really.
i would really love to know what inspired this, because its really unique, I have never heard of a poem about wolves except one of mine, and that's not really about wolves, it has to do with wolves, you know what I mean? But I figure this isn't really about wolves. I just... I just don;t know, I can't wrap my brain around it. Once school starts and I'm literate again I'll reread it, see if maybe I can figure it out XD.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Odayin

8 Years Ago

Thanks Sophie! I always love to see a long, nice review from you. And yeah I know what you mean, th.. read more



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Beautifully written; nice use of language :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Odayin

8 Years Ago

Thanks:)
This piece speaks to me of the contest within a pack for who has the right to be the Alpha. In the first stanza it's the young male feeling powerless against the might of the Alpha male, the second stanza is a flow of time, change and evolution with the young wolf, from pup to adult. The last stanza to me speaks of the transition of power, the old Alpha has grown weak and is now replaced by the new Alpha, who is has seen and learned from the pains of it's youth and now takes the steps into attaining the right to rule the pack.

Fascinating ink!
Aaron

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Odayin

8 Years Ago

I absolutely loved readin this review. You practically pegged the meaning. That wasn't how it star.. read more
Wolfwind

8 Years Ago

Most welcome. =) I completely understand how when i piece starts to flow into ink it is one thing an.. read more
Okay...this isn't one of my few darker moments these days...so I'm gonna look at it from a different light for me..then read again when I'm in the darkness once more. It shouts to me of the boy becoming a man. Both are within but as the body matures the outer shell changes...though the inside stays true..but boy to man ..... subserviant to begin bowing to dictate...but realizing he can become greater than just a boy. A man hides deep within...though I'm lost on the yellow eyes...or just a representation of an inner desire to come forth...way off..but I'll read it again later. Very complex write ... amazing talent you really have. I love how you write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Odayin

8 Years Ago

You actually got parts of that right. It is like a transformation..but not like into a werewolf as .. read more
I absolutely adore the animal!! its my favorite animal and you really did it justice!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Odayin

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Its one of my favorites too and really a beautiful animal to wri.. read more
Oh my God. I saw this on the read requests a while ago and shoved it off. Once I came back to it I started reading and I thought it was a sick poem you found and wanted me to see but then I saw the author's note and I was like "Same pic as Odayin? Whhaaatt?" then I saw your name and I was stunned. Amazing I have to say this is my favorite by you

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunshadow Coyote

8 Years Ago

expected
Sunshadow Coyote

8 Years Ago

oh it was a narration of action...lol i was like what?
Odayin

8 Years Ago

Ohhhh haha
The flow and words seem so natural, it is very well written. I love the rhyming, really witty choice of words:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very natural poem...one i think deserves considerable recognition for your view on peoples boundaries within themselves. A well thought out poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Odayin

8 Years Ago

Hmm, interesting view. I like how you received it
I'm going to review the writing before I attempt the meaning.
So, here we go:
The rhymes are really amazing, and it has a impeccable rhythm. I love the language: Haphazard luxury of a witness, just great, really.
i would really love to know what inspired this, because its really unique, I have never heard of a poem about wolves except one of mine, and that's not really about wolves, it has to do with wolves, you know what I mean? But I figure this isn't really about wolves. I just... I just don;t know, I can't wrap my brain around it. Once school starts and I'm literate again I'll reread it, see if maybe I can figure it out XD.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Odayin

8 Years Ago

Thanks Sophie! I always love to see a long, nice review from you. And yeah I know what you mean, th.. read more

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