More than what you see

Everyone has a false interruption of you, although we know we shouldn't judge one another, we just see the outside and come to our own conclusion.

I hate what people see when they see me,

It's not me,

A false interpretation of what they want me to be,

Of who they think I am,

How I might act,

Tthe way I look can simply tell them all of that,

Make your assumptions,

And keep them to yourself,

If you want to get to know me,

By all means,

Help yourself,

I'd love to show you who I really am,

What I am really like,

That I am not who you think I am,

I'm not just what I look like,

I am me,

And that is all,

Different from the rest,

Yet no different at all,

We all have flaws,

We all have strengths,

And when we put them all together we can accomplish anything,

Were all people,

Sent here to love,

But now a days we do nothing of the such,

So unless you get to know me,

Please refrain, 

You do not know me, 

Just because you know my name.. 

Reviews

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

The voice behind this piece rings out with honesty and openness. The words also flow smoothly, having a lyrical quality to them. People are too quick to create personas for us based upon hearsay and our appearance, never bothering to know the person beneath. Thanks for sharing, it's well crafted.

[OhSnapShley]

& thank you for your feedback. I truly appreciate it. This was a draft I had left unfinished for a while and when I went back I thought to myself, why did I leave this unfinished? Im glad you like how it came out.

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

You're welcome! I get what you mean, I tend to start pieces but lose them in the shuffle while working on others sometimes.