Morbid Eclipse

Morbid Eclipse

A Poem by Ohhhwillow
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29/8/12 The ideas we hold are recycled even when they seem our own, I think it's important to consider all possibilities put in front of us, even if society seems to have rejected them

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I salvaged the broke apples that lay naked in the mud,
Devoured and repulsed, by you.
You cause a storm, violent through the clapping of crimson tides in wasted light,
As the Leviathan bleeds in deep cerulean that kisses my toes and suffocates the fractured that fell
Into my palms and the dirt, while abhorred by the steel plates sat over your sanctuary, society.

I dispose of none in mind, under a morbid eclipse.
Driving on as a car with no wheels in a hurricane.

In your eyes and finger the burning embers nurse an ebony wound that's weeping,
Frantically thinking, are you too a victim of dissatisfaction? Or of me?
As I am, burying my own bones forever.

Wild like rubies and fire enchanted in the wind,
Or still like the ashen stone they tickle,
Words received speak in silence as deafened corpses in the clay if they are to be without
Indulged strength of thought as mine sprawled here.

Lucifer and the Reaper, whoever your masked Messiah is aureate,
Veiled and seductive as your mind at peace in a palm or a pillow.

© 2012 Ohhhwillow


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Absolutely amazing, it's the right mixture of an almost gorey take yet completely psychological.
I adore it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A maizing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!!
Winchester Saltgunner

11 Years Ago

Welcome
'As I am, burying my own bones forever.' this line is the ballast of this poem. so good.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Seems to be a line picked up on by several others too, thank you for reviewing again! :)
"as I am, burying my own bones forever." Great line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it! :)
Dark but very awesome. I couldn't pick my favorite part because it is all my favorite. 100%

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Dark was the aim, aw I'm so glad to hear such positive feedback. Thank you!!
From the very beginning of the poem I felt as if I was just zapped right into your world. I seriously think that you should be published. Like, now. Have you submitted any of these to a real publisher? I would recommend it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Wow thank you, um, I have considered it but I have never showed them to a publisher no!
Wow. You have a unique way of writing. Your vocab is strong,good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Very intricate and articulate. Beautiful writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Ah thank you!
wowww its amazinggggg!! blown away

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Thank you soo much, it means a lot!!! :D

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Added on November 5, 2012
Last Updated on November 5, 2012
Tags: Philosophy, ideas, thought

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Ohhhwillow
Ohhhwillow

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom



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