{Snow Blood Tracks}

 

 

 

A hidden path,

angry past wrath,

dive into a sensitive

subject and stay

awake in the bath.

 

Pick a trail,

what I'm about to tell

is an intriguing tale.

 

Walk in snow blood tracks,

make peace with proven facts.

 

Pick up broken pieces,

somehow find sanity as

heartless hope increases.

 

A hidden path,

angry past wrath.

 

walk in snow blood tracks,

make peace with proven facts.

 

A black cloud stays over my head,

sometimes my vision is only red.

 

Just walk the road

through the storms,

get in line for a better life

and fill out the forms.

 

Say the statement of my name

is remembering each time you bled.

Chase away angry monsters,

make sure God checks under your bed.

Climb the highest mountain

and slide down it with your sled.

 

Pick up broken pieces,

somehow find sanity as

heartless hope increases.

 

Pick a trail,

what I'm about to tell

is an intriguing tale.

 

Walk in snow blood tracks,

make peace with proven facts.

 

A black cloud stays over my head,
sometimes my vision is only red.

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Pretty. I just love walking in the snow, especially the new snow when it falls and leaves a blanket of white. I love to leave my tracks and see me walk through, making me see the new path I will soon take. Very pretty. :)

[BlackCl0ud]

I get a sense of conflict from this, you want to believe one thing but then something else completely different . . . 'Walk in snow blood tracks' is a great image that can be taken in different ways by different poeple. Excellent. ~ BlackCl0ud

[Meggo]

I like this one as well.