First Love

First Love

A Poem by Olivia Rose
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Writing like Shakespeare?:)

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When once the moon and stars they did abide 
And beneath wooden statues did I hide
And doted I upon a lovely lad
For smitten firstly I became quite mad
His iridescent eyes gazing like the stars above
Shimmering like the sea and gentle as a dove
Cooped up in majestic limbs 
I was then sure of his thoughts for me and I of him
Muttered I love you's and whispered poems
A new pathway of feelings down which we roamed
First love. 

© 2012 Olivia Rose


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I love this, it certainly does explain how some people feel for their first love ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! The way it's written is amazing, the descriptions and the way it flows. The words just easily float from your mouth. I wanna read it out loud in a British accent. xD
It's really really good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good poem! Very good descriptions and it flowed nicely. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it! Well done. Very nice descriptions and use of adjectives. It is a well written and very romantic piece. Congratulations!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol you did begin like Shakespeare and then got lost in the first love!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 21, 2012
Last Updated on August 23, 2012
Tags: Romance, Poetry

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Olivia Rose
Olivia Rose

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I am dead, well at the moment. I've also been a napkin, a flapper, and a witch. Wha?? Ok, ok so I'm an actress. Currently I play Karen Cooper, an 11 year old zombie, in Night of the Living Dead haha:).. more..

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