Christmas with Snow White

Dearest Snow White, 

On Christmas Day

Would you take this pain away

skeletal ice, flakes of snow

Lips red as the Baccara rose

skin so smooth, hair as night

In the woods; feel the fright?

rejected elves, with twisted toys

made for naughty girls and boys

kiss my lips, draw me away

away from the misty light of day

the fairest of all, before my eyes

Her grace a blessing to our lives

In the land of misfit toys 

She smile's kindly at me, so coy

A cloak of red, and a dress of blue

the bitten apple, forbidden fruit

punctured skin, the edge of a thorn

stains the snow, forevermore

And on this day we shall share

the Christmas snow is everywhere

all alone, your hand in mine

I spend Christmas with dear,Snow White

Reviews

[Zachary_James]

Wow i have to say, that this is unique and so impressive. I really enjoyed this read, well done.

[Olivia Marie]

thank you :)

[Whiskurz]

Very well penned indeed.....Enjoyed my friend......Whisk

[Olivia Marie]

thank you :D

[afra]

very different write ...i enjoyed it

[Olivia Marie]

thank you :)

[ObscurityNone]

I like this twist from the usual giddy-Christmas-crap.

[Olivia Marie]

thanks, I was listening to an Evanescence CD, and I was letting my mind wonder and somehow this was the outcome.

[ObscurityNone]

I enjoy doing that as well, letting the emotions and over all feeling of a particular song influence your writing.