Void-Less

Void-less space between us

Soft lips grazing across my cheek bone

Strong, warm arms hold me close

Your breath moving across my skin

Words unspoken, but understood

Unexpected need grasping at my heart

Pulling you tighter

Afraid to let go

I bury my head in my chest

You bring your head lower to mine

Our eyes connect

Slowly, falling deeper into each other

Our lips find each other

My blood begins to pump through my veins

Life begins to pour into my heart

Finally I can truly breathe again

Reviews

[Neon]

Cool .. what a stunning write. I loved this piece, i watched a movie through this poem. It's very nice, sensible, meaningful and very realistic to read. Nicely penned. Keep on dear, Oli-Volli .. Your cool.

[Whiskurz]

A Beautiful piece my friend....Whisk

[nostal]

I agree.

[Rob Santana]

Wow I felt the excitement and anticipation in this one.Good job.

[Olivia Marie]

Thank you so much :)

[InsanityWriter]

(: Nice job!! :)

[Olivia Marie]

thank you :)

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

The best thing about this writing is that (although I'm aware that you probably didn't intend this) is that it's genderless and could apply to males and females. I think you have captured the beauty and tension that can universally be felt in a kiss. Also, the last line is captivating. Good work!

[Olivia Marie]

thank you :D