A Poem by Olivia Marie

Another love poem. (Stud M. Note Book) :)


Hair hanging in strands down my face
And  I’ve pulled my knees into a ball
there I sit thoughtless and waiting
Waiting for nothing and everything
When my sides tingle with a touch
And I feel my weight falling upward
I recognize the hands on my side
But I still jump in recognition 
And I focus in on your deep eyes
As yours find there way to mine
Then you pull me gently into your arms

We stand there wrapped around each other
I can feel your heartbeat against mine
So I pull you closer to me
Like a blanket in the snow around a little girl
And I can feel your every movement 
Gentle as a butterfly’s kiss
But strong as a lasting foundation 
Our hearts connect, and everything else stops
You’re all that matters
And here I am standing with you
So you tell me, could it be
Any better then this

© 2012 Olivia Marie

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warm mm isn't guys ?

Posted 10 Years Ago

How are you 15? You write like at least a senior. Take it as a very high compliment from me. The line about hearts connecting and everything else stopping is generic. Your only flaw in this whole thing. SPaG is impeccable.

Posted 10 Years Ago

So cute! Almost like a short story, but your beautiful descriptions and similes make is an excellent poem. The last line lingers, makes me want more! Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Awwwh! great poem! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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You have a strong foundation of imagery for someone just starting, dear poet :) You paint lovely words on canvass! And welcome to the cafe if you haven"t been here long :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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5 Reviews
Added on June 23, 2012
Last Updated on June 25, 2012
Tags: Love, gentle, heartbeat, teen


Olivia Marie
Olivia Marie

Columbiana, AL

My name's Olivia, I go to Shelby County High School, and I love to write. more..