Goodbyes in Heartbreaks

I put masculinity to shame,
As I shed tears for love,
For the first time,
I felt the goodbyes in heartbreaks,
The memories created,
Destroyed to avoid pain,
It was a sad feeling,
Why do we love so much,
And then allow it end,
Did we loose our strength in transit,
When did the zeal to ignore mistakes flee,
Are we risking an experience in search of a perfect partner,
The one we never come across,
But too proud to admit,
Because men will tag us as weak,
For grieving over she,
Unknowingly their hearts is not that Stiff,
The pillow is the only witness,
Soaking true goodbye tears,
It was the best decision,
Even love has to come to a conclusion,
The essence of the departing will never be understood,
If only I could,
But goodbyes are like weeds,
Will always be there even when not needed.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Damn i hate good-byes, on that note. Hello to you. thanks for this lovely write.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.
"But goodbyes are like weeds,
Will always be there even when not needed."
The above lines. Powerful and true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed reading your poem..
thought provoking, well written and expressed.
Perhaps this love is standing in clear view.
Is it possible the we overlook or ignore love that is meant to be?
"Are we risking an experience in search of a perfect partner,
The one we never come across,"
Well done. Keep writing!

[Olumegbon]

Thanks so much for the review, I really do appreciate

[aLittlePain]

Exquisite expression, your words capture the magnitude of the feeling magnificently. R x

[Olumegbon]

Thanks so much for the review, I appreciate.

[wordman]

the power of love is a great power,it can make you or it can break you

[Olumegbon]

Rightly said...