Play me

Play me

A Poem by Omikron

As you take a silent breath, and your fingers search their way
You close your eyes, and the first tone rings in your ears
Your heart skips a beat
The tension between your fingertops and the keyboard
Leaves you breathless
Your heart is bleeding out into clean tones
And you let yourself sweep away
Your body is floating on the back of the sound
And you let yourself go
You let yourself go
Your body is going numb
And your silent heart speaks 
Your spirits are laving you
In a ringing E flat
You surrender to yourself
And I can only wish you would play me like that. 

© 2015 Omikron


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Beautiful piece. I think the depths seemed to let go of a true solid heart's yearnings. You withheld nothing in this piece, I could tell it was of your words because the rhythm was in ease of everything. However, you controlled the pace with the flow of the poem to create an excellent example of poetry on here! I'd recomend you to add some way to alarm the reader; sort of like express the modern era like after you say 'surrender to yourself' you can add 'a heart smothering your soul, a wreck less defeat of one with no morals'. This is harsh but it makes the reader a little up tight as you refer to them in such critical light.


Well done 👍👌

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful piece. I think the depths seemed to let go of a true solid heart's yearnings. You withheld nothing in this piece, I could tell it was of your words because the rhythm was in ease of everything. However, you controlled the pace with the flow of the poem to create an excellent example of poetry on here! I'd recomend you to add some way to alarm the reader; sort of like express the modern era like after you say 'surrender to yourself' you can add 'a heart smothering your soul, a wreck less defeat of one with no morals'. This is harsh but it makes the reader a little up tight as you refer to them in such critical light.


Well done 👍👌

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Omikron
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