Do not be afraid

Do not be afraid

A Poem by Omikron
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Brainstorming, hope you like it.

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Rest your head, my child,
And devote yourself to your spiritual light.
For it is yet to be known of such greatness,
Such power I see scantily depicted in your eyes.
The soul is but a withering flower,
Let the mighty wind guide your path.

Do not be afraid, my child,
For all is gone, not a breath remains.
Nothing to harm you and nothing to warm you.
Yet, your eyes choose to see life,
Where life has never been sown,
In the abundance of hollowness,
Where nothing will ever grow.
You walk the path of desolation,
And let your spirit fill the vacancy,
And let your voice speak of liberty,
And you let your light guide your path,
And let your shadow stay in the past,
To salute you and then silently fade away.

There is only darkness behind you,
There is only light ahead.
Do not be afraid, my child,
I will keep you under my veil,
Until the day that I myself become a faded shadow,
That no longer sleeps in your memories.

© 2017 Omikron


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Critique: (And your voice speak of liberty) speaks of liberty
(I will keep you under my vail) under my veil

Review: I like the passing wisdom down theme, shining the light of experience on to the future generations is noble. The positive message makes this inspirationally uplifting and a pleasure to read Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Omikron

4 Years Ago

Thank you for a great review, as always. Since english is not my mother tongue, grammar is a bit har.. read more
Bear

4 Years Ago

I don't know if I have given you the link to Grammarly yet or not, it is the best writing tool I hav.. read more
Omikron

4 Years Ago

I will check it out, thank you!



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You have some really nice lines in this write. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


Omikron

4 Years Ago

Thank you kindly.

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Very nice poem. A great read. Well done.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Omikron

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind comment :)
Nicely done, i enjoyed this piece of writing. The flow was smooth and you sprinkled wisdom throughout. Good job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Omikron

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Critique: (And your voice speak of liberty) speaks of liberty
(I will keep you under my vail) under my veil

Review: I like the passing wisdom down theme, shining the light of experience on to the future generations is noble. The positive message makes this inspirationally uplifting and a pleasure to read Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Omikron

4 Years Ago

Thank you for a great review, as always. Since english is not my mother tongue, grammar is a bit har.. read more
Bear

4 Years Ago

I don't know if I have given you the link to Grammarly yet or not, it is the best writing tool I hav.. read more
Omikron

4 Years Ago

I will check it out, thank you!

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Added on September 30, 2016
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Omikron
Omikron

Sweden



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