Day 9

Day 9

A Chapter by Omikron
"

Tetractys! (Kind of)

"
9th of December, 2016

You
Be still
Just stand there
So I can see
Your velvet body
Your unretouched being
Hear your mellisonant breath
Just stay there like a figurine
Let me adore you until I die

You, my very own, precious Christmas gift




"You for Christmas"


© 2016 Omikron


Author's Note

Omikron
Pic by lostknightkg at DeviantArt!

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Admiration in its purest form is really an obsession which is only one step away from being a stalker, so be careful and think twice before you decide to unwrap this gift (sorry I couldn't help myself this morning, I am feeling a jolly Christmas spirit) The poem is touching and has a sentimental feel for me as it brings to mind such gifts lost to time but brought back to life by your poem, thank you for that :~)
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Posted 7 Years Ago


Omikron

7 Years Ago

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it, merry christmas Bear :)

// O
I like the obsession that's hidden under cute flattery. Nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Omikron

7 Years Ago

Nice, that's the feeling I was aiming for! Thanks for the review!

// O

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Omikron
Omikron

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