Day 10

Day 10

A Chapter by Omikron
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"Love makes the worst people the greatest actors"

"
10th of December, 2016

Collette, Collette
Your tears I'll collect
I'll store them in a jar
To carefully protect

Collette, Collette
Your pain I'll collect
I'll blur every scar
Your soul I'll perfect

Collette, Collette
Your tears I'd collect
But you smoked me like a cigar
What did I expect?



"Collette"


© 2016 Omikron


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I have 2 rewording suggestions (I'll store them in a jar And carefully protect) in a jar to carefully protect
(A new soul I'll confect) A new soul I'll perfect

I don't know if I would complain about being put between a woman's lips and burned up :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!



Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Thank you for the feedback, I changed it and it reads a lot better now, thanks for the help!
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Omikron
Omikron

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Black and white, white and black In simplicity is also diversity And complex infinity You are ugly, you are silenced Because the world Cannot understand your divinity ------ Darkness dresses .. more..

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