Together We Fly

Together We Fly

A Poem by Dream Weaver

 



 










Be still my heart for many seasons have past, it seems like eternity since I've seen you last.


Enraptured memories of you kept locked up inside, clandestine
sentimentality
unbound untied.

Now you’re here when our lives have been taken reunited in h
eaven two souls have awakened.


Stripped of flesh and earthly ties as our spirits soar high, yes hold me forever together we fly.




 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


© 2016 Dream Weaver


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This is simply beautiful. The thought that it didn't work out on earth but does in heaven is a wonderful thought and idea. The flow of this poem is very smooth and it has a slow delicate feel to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully romantic..in death, still consumed...

Posted 12 Years Ago


this made a divine read. specially the last 2 stanzas...i am not sure if i can fly with my woman of past..however i had my moments...when i used to fly with her and together we used to make it to heavens....guess this will make a delightful read for many who have felt heartache and loss of love...and yet..they await to re-unite with their lovers in heaven.

Posted 12 Years Ago


aww beautiful! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah... this was so sweet. I can almost see it in my image of heaven. Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Those woman of my past. To re-unite would be a difficult decision. Like in the poem. When two heart find pleasure then pain. Would be hard to find paradise again. Your poem had a good ending. Took me 36 years to find a brave enough woman to be with me. Some dreams fall and new one appear. A very good poem. Old dreams and pain become better with time. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

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Posted 12 Years Ago


oh man impressive...it burns to the core ...you hav a true gift of writing....i wish i had too....keep it up

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Very emotive and expressive....Sunflower

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Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a beautiful write here, the words lay down perfectly where they fell. Great write! thanks for sharing. Tc.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


The composition of this poem is so lovely. You pull of a gentle rhyme scheme well here, a distinct flow without exaggerating anything or forcing words. Beautiful.

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Dream Weaver

Paradise, FL



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