Together We Fly

Be still my heart    
for many years
have past
it seems like
forever since I
saw you last.

Fond memories of
you I kept locked
inside, just more
emotions that I
had to hide.

Hi, how are you
has your life
changed much
mine’s just the
same since we
fell out of touch.

It’s funny you
should show up
on this very day
when you broke
my heart and
Simply drifted
away.

Now you’re here
when our lives
have been taken
reunited in heaven
our two souls have
awakened.

Stripped of flesh
our spirits soar high
hold me forever
Together we fly.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is simply beautiful. The thought that it didn't work out on earth but does in heaven is a wonderful thought and idea. The flow of this poem is very smooth and it has a slow delicate feel to it.

[Amy Bumpas]

Beautifully romantic..in death, still consumed...

[serpent]

this made a divine read. specially the last 2 stanzas...i am not sure if i can fly with my woman of past..however i had my moments...when i used to fly with her and together we used to make it to heavens....guess this will make a delightful read for many who have felt heartache and loss of love...and yet..they await to re-unite with their lovers in heaven.

aww beautiful! :)

[Marie Harrison]

Ah... this was so sweet. I can almost see it in my image of heaven. Loved it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Those woman of my past. To re-unite would be a difficult decision. Like in the poem. When two heart find pleasure then pain. Would be hard to find paradise again. Your poem had a good ending. Took me 36 years to find a brave enough woman to be with me. Some dreams fall and new one appear. A very good poem. Old dreams and pain become better with time. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[laveen]

oh man impressive...it burns to the core ...you hav a true gift of writing....i wish i had too....keep it up

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very emotive and expressive....Sunflower

[Jessie]

This is a beautiful write here, the words lay down perfectly where they fell. Great write! thanks for sharing. Tc.

[Inertia]

The composition of this poem is so lovely. You pull of a gentle rhyme scheme well here, a distinct flow without exaggerating anything or forcing words. Beautiful.