Together We Fly

Together We Fly

A Poem by Dream Weaver

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Be still my heart    
for many years
have past
it seems like
forever since I
saw you last.

Fond memories of
you I kept locked
inside, just more
emotions that I
had to hide.

Hi, how are you
has your life
changed much
mine’s just the
same since we
fell out of touch.

It’s funny you
should show up
on this very day
when you broke
my heart and
Simply drifted
away.

Now you’re here
when our lives
have been taken
reunited in heaven
our two souls have
awakened.

Stripped of flesh
our spirits soar high
hold me forever
Together we fly.

© 2010 Dream Weaver




Reviews

A bond never severed. I applaud you for expressing this feeling so powerfully. I've tried writing with this emotion/scene in mind but It has never equaled something this immaculate.

Rating 1,000/100!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow...I like the concept of the bond between x-lovers being so strong that their spirits leave earth at the same time to be reunited in eternity. Nicely written!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww, I really love this poem. I like the simplicity of the words, they're simple but they hold so much truth and meaning in them. (: Love it!

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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Dream Weaver
Dream Weaver

Paradise, FL



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