SELDOM USED

SELDOM USED

A Poem by Miss Sharon
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A love withheld.

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Admiring you from a safe distance,
instinctively I know...you could never be mine.
Lines drawn in the sands of time hold fast to
one small, solitary, seldom used glass slipper.
~~

© 2015 Miss Sharon


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'SELDOM USED'
Miss Sharon,
Admiring another but knowing that it can never be. Your poem gave
the message to enjoy the idea or awareness of people around us.
Not all meetings are meant to flower.
Lines three and four:
'Lines drawn in the sands of time hold fast to
one small, solitary, seldom used glass slipper.'
There is refuge from unnecessary pain when
we guard our hearts.
Blessings,
kathy

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

6 Months Ago

Thank you Kathy for your lovely review of this write! ~Sharon



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Superbly written both logically and poetically. It's not the apple on the tallest tree or the sweetest flavour but the fact that no means impossible. The acceptance of that stings - the slipper slips, sorry, but is true..

It's becoming so hard for me to read your work - present to past, never quite knowing whether to
judge' it on the fine style or - the content and its core.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much my friend for your review of this write! ~Sharon
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

Please stay safe and keep in touch, Sharon.
'SELDOM USED'
Miss Sharon,
Admiring another but knowing that it can never be. Your poem gave
the message to enjoy the idea or awareness of people around us.
Not all meetings are meant to flower.
Lines three and four:
'Lines drawn in the sands of time hold fast to
one small, solitary, seldom used glass slipper.'
There is refuge from unnecessary pain when
we guard our hearts.
Blessings,
kathy

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

6 Months Ago

Thank you Kathy for your lovely review of this write! ~Sharon
Many times we let status, age or looks to stop us from putting the aggressive foot forward never knowing if we would be accepted. I really like the thoughts in this write. Valentine

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend for your lovely comment which is appreciated more than words can express.. read more
Valentine

5 Years Ago

You are very welcome. Kathie
This is a really beautiful piece. I always commend writers who can accomplish such a profound meaning in so little words. And loving someone who doesn't feel the same is a terrible feeling. But its always best to find some sort of solitary ground.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

5 Years Ago

I am very appreciative of your wonderful comment Kristan! Thank you.
sometimes we do love another, but we withhold the foot, don't allow it to be fitted for the slipper because we are too afraid that it won't fit quite right and we will be hurt again.
so yes, there is a safe distance...protection. self-survival.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

5 Years Ago

Bravo...I appreciate your right on interpretation Jacob! ~Sharon

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My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..

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