IT WANTS ME BACK

A Poem by Miss Sharon

Sleeping fitfully, catnaps shuffle dreams
To keep me asleep. It's pointless.
I wake to white sounds of snowfall
As I try to remember what day it is.
All night my body ran on without me...
Now it wants me back.
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© 2015 Miss Sharon

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Coyote Poetry

I do like this poem. Had the feel of dream and struggle to find the proper place again. I like the ending. Left the reader with question. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Made me think this morning.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thanks John for very nice words of comment and approval! That means a lot to me. ~Sharon

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

Demii

Aweh this almost seems sad, like depression, takes a big toll on your life as well. I like how precise and smooth it is.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

I see that you are very perceptive my dear! Yes, this was written during one of my depressive cycles.. read more

9 Years Ago

you're very welcome :)

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Added on March 6, 2015
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My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..