WHO'S THE DEADEST OF THEM ALL?

A woman scorned....

WHO'S THE DEADEST OF THEM ALL?
 
Spider, spider on the wall... Who's the one you choose to fall? Is she pretty, is she sane? Do you know her secret fame? She is hiding....over there. No one really seems to care. She is silent in her pain. You don't even know her name! What you see is what you get? She's seen nothing but regret. Seek her, touch her if you dare... But you'd better kneel in prayer! Women scorned may seek revenge. When the windows come unhinged! Spider, spider on the wall. Who's the deadest of them all! oxoxxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox © Sharon Peeples


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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I am reminded of the saying that hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. That may be true in some cases but I feel many would turn that hurt on the inside. You can have everything but if you can't share it with the one you adore, then you have nothing. Sad poem Sharon.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you my dear for your nice review of this write! You are appreciated. ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

OH MY....a mystery novel in a few stanzas. She hides in the corner, but can snap and be the evil dangerous one. Pain....emotional or physical....can change a person. If those closest to her do not really know her at all, she must feel terribly alone. The sing songy rhyme of this one belies the powerful meaning. I liked it. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you my friend for a beautiful and perceptive review! ~Sharon

[Lorry]

This is why they deserve all they get, whether it be bullies, stalkers or troll... They never hear the warnings and have only themselves to blame.
They surely must know by now that there is a sting at the end of every tale, i guess they just continue to think that they know better and believe their own hype.. Just like venus' fly trap wants them to think 😀
Very playful words Sharon, with just a hint of a sinister smile that knows they are all walking to their own self inflicted demise.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much for your kind review of this write! ~Sharon

[barleygirl]

This is brilliant, snappy, & popping on all cylinders with rhyme & rhythm. I love the revenge threat which seems to be a "thumb-your-nose" at the users & abusers . . . sure we all get stung from time to time, but this poem shows us how not to be a victim (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Miss Sharon]

Awwwwwwwwww! Thanks so much Margie for such a kind review! ~Sharon

[Neville]

I think you are asking a question that you already know the answer to..... Nicely penned my friend... N

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for your nice review of this write! ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel this referring to those who have fame and fortune but are hurting so much inside...all the wealth, power, notoriety cannot replace love when it is missing.
it is like living in a mansion with no furniture...
j.

[Miss Sharon]

(it is like living in a mansion with no furniture...) So very true my friend. Thank you for reading. ~Sharon