RELAPSING....REMITTING

RELAPSING....REMITTING

A Poem by Miss Sharon
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Each day is a rerun of pain and regret.....

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RELAPSING....REMITTING

A Poem by Miss Sharon
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Sorrow that comes and goes...but mostly stays.

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It comes and it passes...but sometimes it stays.
Remorse and privation, connecting the maze.
Each day is a rerun of pain and regret.
I miss him...I need him, yet shadows are set.

The gaze in the mirror was not meant to be.
A life with it's meaning is not meant for me.
I loathe it and push it but yet it holds strong.
This can't be my mission...for everything's wrong!

The world keeps revolving and spins its own way,
But I must be leaving...I've no more to say.
Please do not deter me, my mind has been made.
I've readied the moment...too long I have stayed!

So please don't be angry, it's not about you.
I know that you've offered to change what you do.
But hope and belonging have parted from me.
It really won't matter if I am set free.
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© 2021 Miss Sharon


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Resonating with all in these tethered days of thoughts finding no means of escape and going from a whisper to an all consuming numbness of being the only thought capable, which grow into haunting a mind into submission.
All things must pass, but it doesn't make it any easier, does it?


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much Lorry for a wonderful review of this write. I appreciate you! ~Sharon



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Your expression here Sharon really reaches the heart of this reader. Losing hope surely sinks the soul. I sincerely wish this poem is a fictional write because it is heart wrenching. Beautifully penned as always with lovely rhythm and rhyme.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Miss Sharon

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review....but unfortunately these words are true for me. ~Sharon
Chris

1 Week Ago

I am so sorry to hear that Sharon. Take care.
Hello, Miss Sharon! :)
I hope you are well. This tells a sad story; made up, I hope.
This poem is beautiful, effortless reading, exquisite rhythm, and a touching theme.
What other compliments can I give you? Haha
I'm not very good at reading poetry. I tend to get stuck on metaphors and poetic syntax, and in turn lose the rhythm. So, your straightforward phrasing really made this a pleasure, highlighting the rhythm for me. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for a wonderful, in depth review of this write. I appreciate your kindness very m.. read more
Resonating with all in these tethered days of thoughts finding no means of escape and going from a whisper to an all consuming numbness of being the only thought capable, which grow into haunting a mind into submission.
All things must pass, but it doesn't make it any easier, does it?


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much Lorry for a wonderful review of this write. I appreciate you! ~Sharon
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This was a good write! i enoyed it

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind review of this write! ~Sharon
Wow, I really enjoyed this write of yours. The rhymes kept me entertained but the meaning of these words kept me engaged. Wonderfully explained and expressed! tyfs

Posted 1 Month Ago


Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review of this write! ~Sharon

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My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..

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