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A Poem by Ookpik
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rleb3Syj_nA&ab_channel=WhiteHinterland-Topic

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It had been seasons, entire,
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That he sat beneath the apple tree -
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Immovable as the ground 
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Upon which he sat, so too, still, was he.
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He saw the branches extend daily,
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Following the contours of the sun;
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He saw spring, growth, budding and fresh leaves;
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He saw summer and drought, blight and heat;
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He saw autumn, where the deadened wood would fall;
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And he saw snow, when the world itself
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Would quiet, fast, soundly, to sleep.
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One would think, to see him there,
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Cross-legged beneath the boughs,
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That he might have been a statue - 
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That his featureless eyes
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Were reminiscent of stone, cold, 
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Unopened, as the fissures that weave within
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The features, of the mountain. 
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But were one to look, they'd see he had skin,
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That the heat pulled perspiration
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As the chill would leave it frozen -
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One would see the threadbare, ochre fabrics
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Hanging about his shoulders - they'd see emulsification, 
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Moisture, his tissues, his ribs
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Stretching with the pull of breath,
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Hair, coiling within his lap.
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He was a man, still - no god inhabited his frame -
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Yet he saw much - in the length he sat - that 
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For him to give it voice, and had he the time,
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It'd take an eternity, to explain. 
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© 2021 Ookpik


Author's Note

Ookpik
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQWnCNRq13E&ab_channel=Wisecrack

(lol - quick one)

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This guy sounds like the Buddha, who vowed to sit beneath the bodhi tree until he became enlightened. What we have here is a meditation marathon, encompassing whole seasons, until his hair has grown into his lap. His eyes are closed, and he is utterly still, so that an observer might mistake him for a statue. He must have had some kind of realization, as the last stanza infers, but we are not told what it is. Please tell us one thing, though; did he ever take a bathroom break?

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