Sugar Burst

 

Necklace of strung fireworks
Sparking outward in to sugarbursts
Dancing energetically on my tongue

Today, scratchers are being etched
Jose Cuervo is being chased
And the Arizona sun is beating down

I want to be his sun
I want to radiate on every inch of his flesh
Be the sugarburst that coats his tongue

Author's Note

Tell me what you honestly think :) thanks!!

Reviews

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My my that's a lot sweet there:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Chris Micha]

I like the idea of the use of candy in this piece. It's very playful and romantic. Love it!

[OrangeSlice]

Thank you I was inspired by a candy necklace on our road trip to Arizona :) thanks for the add

[Bluefire]

This poem is yummy! Well done.

[OrangeSlice]

Thank you so much appreciate it, it's always nice to know other people like my poems like I do :)

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[FlamingPhoenix]

Sun touches down with a caress of a lover~ loved that line!

[OrangeSlice]

Me too I rearranged some things but I love that line and the candy sugar bursts lol thank you for your support definitely appreciate it alot :)

[A. Amos]

I enjoyed the read, good work my friend...

[OrangeSlice]

Thank you and I'm still kinda playing with it but I'm happy with it now :)

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[OrangeSlice]

Thank you so much I'm glad you like it, more to come :)

[melissa]

You're welcome