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A Poem by Average person
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Describing someone you love when they stop showing emotion and become seemingly lifeless

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Hello my darling,
Please start smiling,
You never are alone

Hello my dear,
Please shed a tear,
Or are you made of stone?


Hello my love,
Sent from above,
Why have you gone so cold?

Bereft of emotion,
I've gotten the notion,
That you are mine no more.

© 2014 Average person


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Ouch. This is too real... I feel like this is how my ex viewed me after I went through my cold hearted phase. One of my fears is having to watch someone I care about break like this.
*Claps*
Well done with a limited amount of words and overwhelming emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Average person

10 Years Ago

I fear the same though I've done it before myself. And thank you much:)
Angel Criner

10 Years Ago

Trying to hide away and protect ourselves...
We tend to only hurt us even more in the long run.. read more

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Added on February 7, 2014
Last Updated on February 7, 2014
Tags: cold, alone, love, emotion

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Hi. I'm a girl, by the way, just saying because for some reason people tend to think I'm a guy. lol Anyways just doing what I do, writing and what not. My writing isn't deep so don't expect it to be. .. more..

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A Poem by Average person