Unfortunate

As unfortunate as i seem.
My heart subsides where no one can see,
The thought of you makes me want you more
but you are gone, i cant see you any more.


Through the vast distance we are apart
We would do anything to be together again
Hold me tight, dont let me go
For my love can't let you go.


Please come back into my life
The thought of you is fading way in my heart,
Our friends always keep us apart,
It tears me like a knife!

Think of me, cheerish me.
Remember of me and never forget,
Your in MY heart
unfortunatly, am I in yours?

Reviews

[C.A.B.S.]

this was a bit sappy for my taste in poetry but it was also quite sweet.

[Jenny Nelson]

Nice write. You did a good job of getting your feelings across and the piece flows well. Can definitely get a sense of loss and frustration from the poem.

[Lexi =]]

I.S.S keeps you n paige apart haha XD but good poem