You remind me of...

You remind me of...

A Poem by OR
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Only understandable for French and love speakers...

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You remind me of
«Les beaux souvenirs »
When I had no doubt, no fear


You remind me of
«La nuit et le jour qui le suit»
Since darkness and light are in front of me


You remind me of
«Le jeu de poker »
Math is there, but the odds are unfair


You remind me of
 
«Les bisous de pluie»
And then, earth is what I want to be


You remind me of
«Les histoires de gloire »
Where heroes fight and travel far


You remind me of
«L'amour lui-même»
As you glow like a gem


«Enfin, j'ai eu cette fille »
Without her I cannot be

© 2010 OR


Author's Note

OR
Every phrase wrote between " " is in French ...

Meanings of the French phrases :

"Les beaux souvenirs" = Nice memories

"La nuit et le jour qui le suit" = Night and day which flow it (Night)

"Jeu de poker" = Poker game

"Les bisous de pluie" = Rain's kisses

"Les histoires de gloire" = The stories of glory

"L'amour lui-même" = Love itself

"Enfin, j'ai eu cette fille" = Finally, I got this girl

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P.S. : I've used two languages on this to express that I'm unsure and disturbed...
Please do not get bored of my style... I know the rhyming gets rough but this is just a relieve so I got to do it the way I want to...

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. oh, this is a masterpiece ... i want it printed and framed ... on my wall ... what a rare moment of inspiration it must have been ... that led to this unforgettable ode to the love of beauty and the beauty of love ... beautifully written, dude ! ... you so rock ! ...

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This is the most adorable thing ever. I loved it! It was simple and sweet, but so...difficult to understand. Not the poem itself, the emotions behind it.
Nicely done.

~ Fuzzy

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very glad serah sent this my direction

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. and thanks a million for the french to english translation ... so very thoughtful of you ... :) ...

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. oh, this is a masterpiece ... i want it printed and framed ... on my wall ... what a rare moment of inspiration it must have been ... that led to this unforgettable ode to the love of beauty and the beauty of love ... beautifully written, dude ! ... you so rock ! ...

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in much appreciation of the writing style and how the emotion is expressed , who needs rhyme when you have flow .

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I really enjoyed this, particularly the poker stanza.

For the quotations in French, remember that French quotes are like this: «quote»

Other than that, I liked it.



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Great write and thank you for the french lesson..hehe. Beautiful

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Love the mix of languages... the co mingling of two poems in one written in two languages... I love this... and the translation at the bottom, very nice effect!
~lovely

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this is good. it was a chore translating. i love this though! first i'm a huge poker player, so the poker reference already had me and rain kisses...how beautiful; why would anyone not want to where the rain kisses are happening! it liked this write and the author's note; you can only do it how you want! beautiful write!

-light-

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