My sense of You

I Do Sense You

Do you ever wonder, if I taste you
within swirling morning tides
Have you ever wondered,
If I "breathe" you,
encompassed by silvered stars
Do you ever wonder, if I touch you,
amidst the nature of myself
Have you ever wondered,
the whisper of you,
as breezes graze my thoughts
Do you ever wonder of my visions,
Knowing your all, I've never sought

Thanks G

Reviews

[Melbourne Bound]

Hey Cowboy! Awesome write!

[Michael X]

Nice job, has depth, feature and passion that depict specific pondering notions encompassing desire.

[Gandré]

wow. this is so near to the nature, near to the stars. Why don't only few writers write such a earth-near poetry? This is true love. (thanks for your contribution to my chicken-crossing-the-road-question.. Your answer is posted together with the others within the piece. Be well, G.

[Angel's Lady]

Do you ever wonder, if I taste you
within swirling morning tides --- THAT is a freaking awesome line!

Great write! You paint a picture with words and make it felt. Nicely done!