Thank You Sun

Thank You Sun

A Poem by P.H. Carver

You keep me warm,

Cutting through the night,

Lighting my way,

And sustaining life.

Yet the day may come,

When you flicker from existence,

And I lay there dying,

Missing your strong stance.

We could never be together you and I,

For if I were to touch you I would surely die.

And so it must be,

Until the day we must part,

Thank you sun,

For your caring heart.

© 2011 P.H. Carver

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P.H. Carver
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Ok .. I Love this .. An appreciation of the SUN ... Nice ... Jasmine :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this, it's short and sweet. i can feel the sun's warmth on me as i read it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on October 15, 2011
Last Updated on October 25, 2011
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