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Sudden Tension

Sudden Tension

A Story by H. Allyza V. Makkink
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A "Free Write" exercise.

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She stepped out of the elevator with a red blush upon her cheeks.  She stopped in her tracks and took a moment to turn her head around seeing no one inside as the doors closed.  Placing her hands on either side of her face, she closed her deep blue hue eyes momentarily.  What has occurred so drastically to cause her to feel so nervous and scared all at the same time?

“Just leave me alone!”, she cried lowering her hands in the process, “I can’t help you!”

Suddenly, the doors of each hotel room in the hallway she was standing in, opened with loud bangs echoing and vibrating beneath and around the walls.  She jerked back opening her eyes in shock feeling the intensity around her.  In desperation, she hesitated momentarily before she ran down the hallway.  As she did, each door closed behind her causing a loud agitating rhythm to develop that made her panic.

“Please! Leave me be!”, she cried.
The lights began to flicker before darkness consumed her completely. 

© 2016 H. Allyza V. Makkink


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H. Allyza V. Makkink
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Added on September 21, 2016
Last Updated on September 21, 2016
Tags: write, free, mystery, activity, poltergeist, paranormal, elevator, girl