Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Falling Down Around You Pt. 2

Falling Down Around You Pt. 2

A Poem by FantasyWriter01
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Continuation of previous poem.

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I cannot carry,
The weight of worlds,
I cannot breathe,
The lies you speak.
Gun finds my temple,
Knowing the inveitable.
I count myself down,
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3
2
1
BANG.
I feel something,
Something great,
The weight,
The weight of living,
It has been lifted,
Lifted from my soul.
I am free,
Forever free.

© 2015 FantasyWriter01


Author's Note

FantasyWriter01
Again, I'm not suicidal, I'm simply trying to convey a powerful And sad message. I hope you understand. Advice is appreciated, as always!!

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Added on March 5, 2015
Last Updated on March 5, 2015
Tags: Death, pain, gun, blood, sadness, sad, deep, poem

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FantasyWriter01
FantasyWriter01

Hanover Park, IL



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