Young And Wise

The story of a very special girl.

Daddy says I'm different,
And I believe him,
I know things even he doesn't know.
I see things he can't.
Mommy says I'm special,
And I know I am.
She says I'll do something great,
Some day.
Says that God sent me here,
To save them.
And I believe them.
But they don't know,
That I need to leave them,
Very, very soon.
That they will not have their Grace,
For much longer,
Becaus God is calling me home,
Says that I have done,
What He has asked,
And that tonight,
I will see him again.
I'm excited,
Thrilled, even.
But mommy and daddy,
They won't understand.
They will be scared,
Sad,
Angry.
But they don't need to be.
Because I am home,
Home again.

Author's Note

Any advice is much appreciated.

Reviews

[FantasyWriter01]

Thank you! I appreciate it :)

[Inject Positivity]

The heaven is nothing but another safe place just as our home... Your poem speaks to me that no matter how hard our leave from this world would be, but we will be in the safe hands of God in heaven, in a home just like the home we have on earth... Beautifully thought out dear frnd... From the first to last the poem shows your uplifting nature... God bless you...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Mirror]

This poem of yours is refreshing. A stark truth guised in an attractive language of subtlety. When I read it I become that little child desperate to go home yet feeling a pang of uncertainty in leaving 'this' home behind.
Beautifully written, kudos!