I am an apprentice at the institution of life!

I am an apprentice at the institution of life!

A Poem by PP
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My learnings...And more!

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I am an apprentice at the institution of life, 
Life seems like its balanced upon the edge of a sharp knife. 
I do no compromise, I invest a lot in hard work! 
I do fairly well with the Dream module, 
It's my Attention module that I am weak at. 

I opted for love instead of career, 
It was a bad choice
Because I was a total failure.

I top the class in language of wrath
And have work experience in 'Confusion' 
When it comes to Responsibility
Nature has recommended me saying I am second to none! 

I have batchelored in grief, 
But happiness is my forthcoming elective. 
I am yet to learn about Myself
Think I will Master in positivity. 

I am an apprentice at the institution of life
It is taking longer than I thought to graduate because there is so much more...
And the endless learning, just never STOPs!!! 

© 2014 PP


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"I am an apprentice at the institution of life"
We are all apprentice to trying to understand life. I like the story in the poem. I believe we find more errors then victories in our young age. A two sided coin I believe. Must test life right or wrong. Thank you for sharing the thoughts provoking poetry. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote for sharing your thoughts and complimenting my poem. Love the way you have compared.. read more
I dig how you abandon form and rant. Two of my favorite things, done well. Solid write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Stimey, I am glad you like this piece:)
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DrD
This is among my favorites of your work because of its originality. It is a marvelous concept to compare life experiences to the university experience. This work has nice form and clever word arrangements. Another that I really like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

D you are making me really confident now. Many thanks I you won't believe how much I value your revi.. read more
I'm inclined to agree with Mr Turner, best of both worlds. Keep them coming PP.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ha! This poem seems itself balanced on a knife edge between poetry and prose. Loving the straight-talking tone!
Wrath? No. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on November 8, 2012
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Tags: Life, dream, positivity

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