Winter

Winter

A Poem by PadfootBlack

Collarbones jutted out
waiting for fervent kisses
little nips followed by
flashing smiles
teeth like white paint
splattered on
night's blue canvas
supple lips and
soft smooth skin
that seems natural to touch
Laughing eyes crinkle
as the puffy white comforter
is pulled needily higher
to cover
the conjoined bodies
sharing warmth that spreads
like hot cocoa after skiing

© 2012 PadfootBlack


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sensuous and sensual..

Posted 10 Years Ago


PadfootBlack

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
THIS IS PERFECT AND YOU'RE PERFECT AND AGH THE LAST LINE. STOP. FEELINGS. I THINK I JUST DIED.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PadfootBlack

11 Years Ago

I LOVE YOU
Just Another Writer

11 Years Ago

I LOVE YOU TOO
An emotional flame that burns with love……great job! Yeah lets give it up for Winter, y'all! That groundhog was dead WRONG!!! XD

Posted 11 Years Ago


EverleafOwl

11 Years Ago

*love....sorry! Spelling....
PadfootBlack

11 Years Ago

awww, thanks! :)
EverleafOwl

11 Years Ago

Welcome! Blue's a cool color! X)
I love winter, i've damn craze of winter. Nicely written, very nice, coldness.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PadfootBlack

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. Winter's my favorite.
Acer

11 Years Ago

My pleasure, Mine too :-'')
Very "warm" and emotional feelings you managed to pin here...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


PadfootBlack

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Oh I love this, so warm and cozy and full of shared loved.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PadfootBlack

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PadfootBlack

11 Years Ago

I like YOU. and i'm glad you're alive, i haven't heard a whisper from you in ages.
_thesovo

11 Years Ago

A whisper? Darling, let me shout.
I LIKE YOU TOO DOT.
And I'm glad you're alive as well.. read more
PadfootBlack

11 Years Ago

Visit me. Talk to me. Tell me about your life, little muppet.

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Added on October 31, 2012
Last Updated on November 3, 2012

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