Things I Should've Done

Things I Should've Done

A Poem by PadfootBlack
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A list poem. Self explanatory.

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Things I Should've Done

 

Said no.

Hid my tears.

Gone alone.

Walked away.

Stopped talking.

Hugged you.

Told you I loved you.

Listened.

Forgave You.

Cried in your arms.

Said yes.

© 2010 PadfootBlack


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PadfootBlack
Short, I know. But... to the point, I hope. Thoughts?

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How is it possible for you to sum up the story of our lives in such a short and simple poem...? "Walked away". Every single day (even now I'm kicking myself)...

Short? Yes. To the point? Let's say this... A master smith in Japan folding the steel of a katana ten thousand times, curving the blade just perfectly, and sharpening it to the point it could cut the fabric of the Universe Herself could not have made a finer point than this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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eloquent and heartbreaking
beautiful job, as always

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PadfootBlack

8 Years Ago

thanks I think you're perfect
short, simple, to the point, and sweet

Posted 10 Years Ago


For such a small poem you basicaly told the story of my life. I am going to read more of your writing and if it is this good I am subscribing to you. Keep writing, we need more writers like you in New York. Could you check out some of my poems? It would be great if you could also give a review. Thanks!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short , remarkable , and yes to the point.
I loved this piece. Very few writers can covey emotions and ideas in pieces this short.

Lovely write .

Posted 10 Years Ago


awesome!!!
began and ended in a wow manner!!!
we regret not doing many things in life..
so its said, better to do it and regret, than to not do and regret..
nicely penned..

Posted 10 Years Ago


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simple words with a message..sentiment is strong..

Posted 10 Years Ago


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. brilliant, brilliant, brilliant ... i love brevity when it is dazzling ... and you made it dazzle with simplicity, profundity, warmth and elegance ... beautifully written ... i so needed to read this ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Wow, a two-hour love-story in eleven well-descriptive lines. Imagination plays along with a story, but the lines in this one guides creative imagination to the max! In my imagination, the story ended in a mutual understanding and happines. Liked it. (Know you wrote this five months ago!)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it. I always like things that are to the point.

It leaves questions, which I like.

Excellent job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 9, 2010
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Tags: Sad, dark, depressing, Things, I, should, have, done, List poem

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