My Wish

My Wish

A Poem by PadfootBlack
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A just-for-fun poem. About a month ago, I went on a zero sugar diet just for the heck of it. Like- NO sugar, fruit being the only exception. So I wrote this little thing in dedication.

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My Wish

 

I wish I had a gumdrop,

as blue as blue can be

I wish I had a chocolate bar,

preferably Hershey's

I wish I had some Smarties,

or perhaps a Milky Way

This diet's gonna kill me

and it's only the

first day.

© 2010 PadfootBlack


Author's Note

PadfootBlack
I suck at grammer-spelling, so can anyone tell me if Hershey's, Milky Way, and Smarties should be underlined or italicized because they're brand names?

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Sooooo you're not surprised, but I love this. And anyone on top of anyone that makes a big deal about the names of candy being italicized.. If you want to know for the sake of being a better writer, fine, but I will attack them. This is really cute with a bouncy little rhythm to it. And your taste in candy is impeccable. lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is cute:) No sugar?????I could never do that... ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very cute...nice humor:) Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sooooo you're not surprised, but I love this. And anyone on top of anyone that makes a big deal about the names of candy being italicized.. If you want to know for the sake of being a better writer, fine, but I will attack them. This is really cute with a bouncy little rhythm to it. And your taste in candy is impeccable. lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 9, 2010
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Tags: sugar, candy, diet, food, chocolate

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