Dawn

Dawn

A Poem by PadfootBlack

Lush flowers bloom

Amid mammoth trees

Cradles

For the woodland birds

Whose feathers glimmer, glorious

A display of divine design.

 

A shy gilded sun

Peeks above mountains blue

Still darkened by the remnants

of Night's embrace

Perrywinkle

splattering the sun-tinged sky

 

A dove coos

Welcoming the brilliant orb

Coaxing her to join the clouds

Beautiful hesitance

Peaceful weariness illuminated

The Heavens alight.

 

His painting, so sweet.

© 2011 PadfootBlack


Author's Note

PadfootBlack
Looked outside my window and admired His painting this morning.

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This is written with amazing visual acuity...you have done justice to the painting. But I will never read anything of yours again without judging it against "Him" and all else pales by comparison. Not from any lack of beauty in these words, it's simply that nothing could possibly approach the brilliance of that piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The pictures are brilliant and clear..I watch the sun rise everyday, and know the painting well.

Love these lines:

"A shy gilded sun"

"Perrywinkle
splattering the sun-tinged sky"

"A dove coos
Welcoming the brilliant orb"

enjoyed
नमस्ते,





Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is written with amazing visual acuity...you have done justice to the painting. But I will never read anything of yours again without judging it against "Him" and all else pales by comparison. Not from any lack of beauty in these words, it's simply that nothing could possibly approach the brilliance of that piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this one- picture is beautiful:) thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the description! I could definitely see a picture formed in my mind, very lovely. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very expressive, descriptive, and creative work..Enjoyed reading this early morn..I could see that dawn break on the periwinkle sky...Sunflower

Posted 9 Years Ago


A tapestry you paint with such rich words, the beauty of the creation astounds all who care to look, so many cannot see. beautiful poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cute. :]



Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh yes, I am able not only to see it, butI to feel it envelope me with peace and comfort!
A lovely write!! His painting is indeed so sweet - MAJESTIC!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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