My Graffiti Poem

My Graffiti Poem

A Poem by Sara
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A poem I wrote after my fiance jumped out of the car while I was driving...

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There Are No Words To
Describe How Someone Jumping Out of A
Car Makes You Feel
Just
A Fistful of S****y Emotions
That Range From
Anger, Sadness, Jealousy, Self-Loathing, Loathing, Hatred, Heart-Break
Loneliness, Alienation, Unworthy, Useless, Livid, Seething
But The Worst
Thing of All
Is Knowing You Didn't Love me Enough
To Stick It Out
You Didn't Know Me Well Enough
That I Didn't Really Mean It
AND You Didn't Care Enough to Think 
How This Would Affect OUR Family
ME
YOU
JASMINE

© 2012 Sara


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ATG
A sad, but well written poem. Making each word capitalized was interesting choice that added a little something extra to the poem. Made the feeling of all those negative emotions come across better. Overall, a well written poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


like how the anger and frustration on the surface chops off your lines at unexpected places at the beginning, leading into the release of a deluge of the sadness underneath at the end

Posted 9 Years Ago


such a sad write, so well expressed

Posted 9 Years Ago


poignant and honestly felt Sara
Ain't catharsis grand ...we get it off our chest and feel good when we finish..maybe not right away....but soon...
anybody who jumps out a moving car, you don't really want in you life anyway...too dangerous.
Well done and welcome
allen

Posted 9 Years Ago


nicely written poem, nice images you have drown, nice words picking. although it is a real sad frustrating poem, you managed to make the reader feel that what means you could transfer your feelings to th reader. really great work..

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is sad, and I'm sure frustrating for you.
Good luck in ironing this out.
I hope he at least landed comfortably and didn't try this at sixty miles an hour.


Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 30, 2012
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Tags: emotion, true story, pain, graffiti, notebook, broken heart, family

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Sara
Sara

Houston, TX



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I'm a nerdy gamer druid girl. I'm very passionate about almost all the things I do. I write poetry kinda haphazardly and I'm working on a steampunk novel based on societal/political influences sorta. .. more..

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