The Gemini Project

Right now I'm looking for overall impressions. The narrative style I've chosen is along the lines of something like West World in the sense that the jargon and origins of how this world came to be are not explained. You have to figure things out as you go. My hope is that it's interesting enough to make you want to Figure Out what the terms mean, what the characters are talking about, etc., without it being too overwhelming for the average reader. This is a balance I'm still working on, and it is by far the biggest thing I'd on which like feedback. What confuses you and why? What works and what doesn't? What makes you ask questions, and what should I explain more if you're just flat out confused enough to want to stop reading?