For You.

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures 

and recite verses 

from endless planets.

With every star 

that sparks the sky,

I'll direct their light 

on my devotion 

for the whole world to see.

We'll watch yesterday 

drift away

in swirls 

of sunset ripples.

Author's Note

I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

Reviews

[Haley]

This is a very sweet and beautiful, celestial poem. Thank you :)

[Bare trees]

Thanks for reading, Haley. :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Relic,
You got me big time here! I am so into starlight, twinkles on water, and the inspiration to think bigger and further. You did well to make this about bigger and further than what is seen. Inspiration is like that.
Great Job!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Bare trees]

Thanks very much for the kind review, Kathy.

[Rye]

This is a very beautiful write.

[Bare trees]

Thanks so much, Ryanna. :)

[Rye]

not a problem

[DIVYA]

I love the celestial theme running through the poem. It gives divine hues to the love. I love the reference to sunset, “swirls of sunset ripples” It’s beautiful, vivid and speaks to me of fairy tale endings.

This poem has everything a lasting, spiritual love needs without being overtly fleshly or sensual.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Romantic but perhaps lacking in passion? Still a nice piece though.

[Jade]

I think it is a wonderful write, very nice and well written

[Bare trees]

Thanks, for taking the time to leave a review.

[Jade]

not a problem, it was a very good write

[Ana Papaya]

wonderful and romantic, a very inspired poem.

[Bare trees]

Thanks a lot Ana.

[MCS]

its lovely and tender and sweet

[Bare trees]

Thanks for the review, MCS.

[A.G.]

Beautiful poem my friend (:
wow, I honestly loved it. the poem was short but meaningful. thank you for sharing.
-Angelina

[Onlyme]

So romantic, passionate as well as so sincere..awwww beautiful basically.

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Onlyme]

You have a romantic heart.